Live With Intention

Subscribe for more! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCrOsRoyaaVS78dVN7yNbpqQ These were the five critiques I received as soon as I went into my graduate program. I would've NEVER guessed this feedback would be so crucial. This advice isn't just for new writers, but it happened to be feedback for me as a new writer. 1. I took every line of feedback, and fixed it. Someone ended up telling me that was the biggest problem of all. I took everyone's feedback and tried making 'tweaks' to my story in order to please everyones suggestions. Proceed with caution when it comes to reviews. I use the rule of three. When I hear or see one review three or more times, I usually change it. 2. Although I felt my characters were very diverse, one piece of feedback I got was that all of my characters were generally good looking. 3. Going along with number two, not only did my characters need to be more diverse, but my dialogue. My dialogue needed interruptions and more natural hiccups in a conversation. 4. I let friends and